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Bullying - Six Word Story

by ~astropix

"She died."
"Move on."
"I can't."
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For the :iconsixwordstories: theme "Bullying."

Dark. Sorry about that.

My first thought with the prompt was the teen "bullycides" that have happened lately.
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^3wyl Jan 22, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Ah... quite direct, I have to say, and it carries a sense of coldness, as well, if you get what I mean?

I like the way it's quite short and snappy, as that reflects the tension felt and all... It makes the situation that more profound where the impact is concerned and such.

Not bad. :nod:

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~astropix Jan 22, 2011
I'm actually not sure if this is a "genesis of a bully" or "aftermath of a bully" story. It could be both.

Thank you!

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^3wyl Jan 23, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Indeed. =/

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