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Six-word Story - Palindrome
by ~astropixMirrors promised kindness for all girls.
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I have a much larger story about this in the works, but it condenses nicely.
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I like how you focus on the mirrors for one and then girls for the other. It's quite cool how both subject matters are at either side of the piece itself, but I think that's just me. o.O
The concept is great and I like the way you've approached it as well. You've managed to incorporate a bit of personification to make it more interesting, so that's good about this piece as well.
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Thank you so much for commenting. I'm looking forward to trying out more prompts and getting better. I think this is a great exercise in storytelling.
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I'm glad!
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